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The escapist.

            Pia sat by the bonfire, hugging her knees tight against her pounding heart; the run on the beach had been invigorating indeed!

    The crackling of the fire and the chirping of the crickets were the only sounds she heard. She inhaled a lungful of the cool breeze  and looked up at the million twinkling stars that had come out of their blankets. Sleep had long since deserted her; but that was not her worry tonight. In fact, there were no worries tonight. 

       Tonight there was peace in Pia's 'world' - her secret haven away, far away from her madding crowd.


99 words.

This post is part of FRIDAY FICTIONEERS by ROCHELLEWISOFF.

            


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  1. Now, I want to go to the beach. Good experience here in the feeling of the piece. Nice!

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  2. Such a peaceful picture painted, far away from the madding crowd. Alone with her thoughts, she is at complete tranquility. Well done, Shilpa :)

    One tip. Can you lose the Captcha? It limits comments :)

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    1. Thank you, Shailaja for your encouraging comments and also for the tip! :)

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  3. I liked the scenario. How nice it would be to leave the crowd and sink into the solitude once every while! Nicely done, Shilpa!

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    1. Indeed, Uma! We really need some getaway moments every once in a while to recharge our batteries!

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  4. Dear Shilpa,

    You've done a good job of setting the scene. I felt the chill in the air, the warmth of the fire on my face and heard the ocean waves.

    shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. Thank you, Rochelle! It is the place (in my mind) that I escape to whenever I feel the need to be by myself.

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  6. I envy Pia - you paint a lovely picture of peace.

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  7. Shilpa, Good story. There are fewer and fewer places where we can find that kind of peace and quiet in the world today. Well written. : ) ---Susan

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  8. Very well written and well captured. Peaceful and tranquility painted :) With stars alone away from madding crowd :)

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