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The vow.



 
              The leather belt's metallic buckle pulverised my wrist bone, sending shockwaves through

my  entire being.  He had battered my body ruthlessly; crushed my heart brutally.

But, now my mind was made.

              "It's payback time!"  I whispered, and his smile vanished. At last.
 

             

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  1. I found it rather chilling, Shilpa. Very different from what you usually write. Good to see you flexing your muscles :)

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    1. Oh my! Thanks Shailaja! IIt's a first! 😀 And yes, need a whole lot of muscle flexing to do!

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    2. Oh my! Thanks Shailaja! IIt's a first! 😀 And yes, need a whole lot of muscle flexing to do!

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  2. I agree with Shailaja! Well done trying something different like this. Lots of emotion in such a short word count. I can feel her hatred and thirst for revenge.

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    1. Thank you, Cat! I did my best and plan on keeping at it! :-)

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  3. Serves him right, Shilpa. Though chilling, the ending is apt.

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  4. Serves him right, Shilpa. Though chilling, the ending is apt.

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  5. Serves him right, Shilpa. Though chilling, the ending is apt.

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